Time Undone
Roll away and don’t you stop
Escape from the grip of the killing clock
It has been undone – This time
Can you feel the wind on your face?
You never noticed it was there all this time
Let yourself be a kid again
Remember us lying on the grass
Our eyes exchanging colours with the World
Our minds sharing thoughts with the skies
Just think about what matters now
You and I, us and Him
When you are dying slowly
Know that the time is drowning you
Surf through the waves
The sea is timeless: you can walk on it
Roll away and don’t you stop
Escape from the grip of the killing clock
It has been undone – This time
Can you feel the wind on your face?
You never noticed it was there all this time
Let yourself be a kid again
Remember us lying on the grass
Our eyes exchanging colours with the World
Our minds sharing thoughts with the skies
Just think about what matters now
You and I, us and Him
When you are dying slowly
Know that the time is drowning you
Surf through the waves
The sea is timeless: you can walk on it
Une fois de plus, je suis touché par la sincérité de tes écrits. Tu es décidément un homme d'émotion, et la beauté de tes mots épurés diffuse ta plus belle sensibilité.
RépondreSupprimerOur eyes exchanging colours with the World.
RépondreSupprimermm. Ça c'est beau. En fait, ce poème me rappelle Fern Hill de Dylan Thomas. L'as-tu lu? Time, dying, the sea...
T'es un gars de couleurs, pareil, Kik. Tes poèmes, ce ne sont pas des poèmes, ce sont des toiles.
RépondreSupprimeré c ben beau maintenant que tu as changé le formatting! À date, c'est mon préféré de tes poèmes.
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